What I liked most about this was the plot - not just time at the club, but instead we have this sensual afternoon as she prepares herself. That was delightful - I could almost smell the lavender bath! I also loved how you chose to include him revealing himself; what a fabulous surprise to discover it was him of all men! Yum yum!

And I must say, that 'one hour later' first few sentences = phwoar!

Lovely work, MA! Am really enjoying the variations that we're getting with the fest. Lucky us!