I loved the atmosphere--I'm a bit of a sucker for Christmas fics, and I really enjoyed the way it was set up in the pub with Severus reflecting on the welcome relief of having no students staying at the school during the holidays. The chatter around the off-duty professors' table was very fun to read as well--and I loved that we got both Hermione and Severus' perspectives.
Also... this line gave me a good cackle:
And then she had to go and mention her vibrator, which wasn’t even called Bob! It didn’t have a bloody name, for fuck’s sake!
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Also... this line gave me a good cackle:
And then she had to go and mention her vibrator, which wasn’t even called Bob! It didn’t have a bloody name, for fuck’s sake!
Great job, MA!