Yes, you did change the prompt a little, but Vector cursed him and he's suffering from erectile dysfunction. You got the important bits, so that's what matters. Good opening start. AND YOU HAD HIM DRINKING CALVADOS! Either you are very familiar with my writings or you luckily threw that in, since I'm a fan of having someone drinking Calvados in my fics. So extra kudos to you, MA. I'm thrilled already and only one-third of the way through. Off to read the rest!
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